very nice as always, well written, thorough, lots of successful e.g's but...
more emphasis needed on your work - the themes yes but really deconstruct the cinematic techniques. did you follow conventions or not? as well as edits/cam think also about the colour filters and obviously props/settings/locations (which you do mention).
you also need to cover your ancillary tasks!! sorry!!
very nice as always, well written, thorough, lots of successful e.g's but...
ReplyDeletemore emphasis needed on your work - the themes yes but really deconstruct the cinematic techniques. did you follow conventions or not? as well as edits/cam think also about the colour filters and obviously props/settings/locations (which you do mention).
you also need to cover your ancillary tasks!! sorry!!
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